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Toria Burrell-Hrencecin's avatar

Very engaging! I'm definitely hooked! You write very well, with lots of detailed sensory descriptions, and complex emotions, bringing the scenes and the feelings alive. It's a beautiful premise and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! Congrats on the first chapter!

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Absolutely brilliant and mesmerizing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this, whatever your reason.

Keep going, I want to "see" the rest.

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