Very engaging! I'm definitely hooked! You write very well, with lots of detailed sensory descriptions, and complex emotions, bringing the scenes and the feelings alive. It's a beautiful premise and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! Congrats on the first chapter!
Very engaging! I'm definitely hooked! You write very well, with lots of detailed sensory descriptions, and complex emotions, bringing the scenes and the feelings alive. It's a beautiful premise and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes! Congrats on the first chapter!
Absolutely brilliant and mesmerizing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing this, whatever your reason.
Keep going, I want to "see" the rest.